Firefly Drabble: What River Sees
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ashlesha17Fandom: Firefly
Title: Strange Brains See Things Others Miss
Character: River
Prompt: See
Word Count: 100
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Spoilers: None
Rating: G
Written for:
weaselyangelRiver sees Simon crying though there are no tears on his face
She sees Inara’s anguish in her alluring walk
She sees Mal’s home Shadow, now just a burnt shell
She sees Kaylee’s poor, but happy home crowded and colorful
She sees Hera and Mal’s heartbreak through Zoe’s eyes
She sees the fellow prisoners laughing at Wash’s shadow puppets forgetting for a little while
She sees Book’s rows of vegetables thriving as he prays for forgiveness
She sees Jayne slowly writing to his mother always tucking credits into the envelope
River wishes he could see who she used to be.
She sees Inara’s anguish in her alluring walk
She sees Mal’s home Shadow, now just a burnt shell
She sees Kaylee’s poor, but happy home crowded and colorful
She sees Hera and Mal’s heartbreak through Zoe’s eyes
She sees the fellow prisoners laughing at Wash’s shadow puppets forgetting for a little while
She sees Book’s rows of vegetables thriving as he prays for forgiveness
She sees Jayne slowly writing to his mother always tucking credits into the envelope
River wishes he could see who she used to be.
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Date: 2006-04-04 02:04 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-04-04 06:13 pm (UTC)Thanks girl! I've gotten such good feedback for this one that it makes me *teary and smiley*, really I love phrase with constructive comments/criticism.
Last line a pointer towards that scary J/R/S story I've committed to write weaselyangel. I'm scared! Thanks again, I like you *bg*.
lesha