Anticipation

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Title: Anticipation
Author: Jules saturnine_tears
Fandom: Firefly/Serenity
Rating: Hard NC17
Pairing: Simon/Kaylee
Word Count: 11460
Disclaimer: Firefly and all related elements belong to Joss Whedon.
Summary: Simon is feeling very dominating and decides that Kaylee needs to be teased relentlessly.
Beta: Tessa frellingblonde
Table: Click here for my 50kinkyways table.
Notes: Translations in mouseover and at the bottom of the page for those whose browsers refuse to cooperate.

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Well, LJ won't let me post it as one part, so here are the TWO parts to the story!

Anticipation - Part 1
Anticipation - Part 2

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Tell me what you think!

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Comments

whoa

[meimeitam.livejournal.com]

Wow, was this the hottest thing I ever done read!

Few spelling and punctuation errors but I can see how they'd be overlooked in the burnin' hotness that is this fic.

Re: whoa

[saturnine-tears.livejournal.com]

I'm guessing the spelling errors were those pesky things that spellcheck won't pick up because they're not ACTUALLY spelling errors, just typos (things like "stars" coming out as "starts" and such). I had the fic beta read, so they should have all been caught, but I'll go through it again just to make sure.

As for grammatical errors, as in punctuation, I know the way I write dialogue into the story is different than the truly proper way, but it's how I prefer to write.

Sorry if any of these elements were distractions! I hope you enjoyed it anyway!