New WIP- crossover Spander & Firefly

[babysquid.livejournal.com]

okay... I'm posting about it here... but mostly I'm afraid it'll remain a WIP forever. My muse abandoned me and this has been sitting on my hard drive for a couple of months without any love. So... I'm putting it out there in the hopes that someone's comments, criticism, love, etc will bring back the muse and help me write the rest.

it's probably mostly crap anyways... I dunno. *shrug* okay... i guess it has potential.

Untitled Spander/Firefly Fic
Rated- at least an R
Author- babysquid
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Comments

[calijirl5150.livejournal.com]

What a nice litte verse you have started. Keep it going please,I'm dying to find out why Zoe gives Zander the "tinglies":)

[quillscribe.livejournal.com]

You know what? I enjoyed it. Interesting takes on the previous relationships, and why Xander was turned (poor Xander!). I'm intrigued at what River will have to say about them, and why Zoe gave them tingles, but not Mal (what? Not Mal? *g*).

Even amidst a grieving ship, Kaylee is still the brightest star. Bless her cheerful soul.

I'm curious where Inara is? What did the crew steal from the planet? What did you have in mind for a continued dynamic between Spike, Xander, and Serenity's inhabitants?

I kind of like the fact that these two men stumble upon a ship that's not yet found it's rhythm after Miranda. That much is clear. The crew seem to be living hand to mouth and not doing much more than coping.

Could Serenity draw Spike and Xander back to being willing to include humans into their lives? And what about the Tams? Are they still being hunted? Will the vampires get caught up in the Alliance intrigue as Mal continues to do what he does best?

Lots of potential in this gem. I'd love to see you go forward with it. Thanks for posting!

[lvs2read.livejournal.com]

I know absolutely nothing about Spike and Xander--never watched Buffy or Angel, but I really enjoyed this story and hope your muse returns so that you can write more of it.

My only concrit is that Kaylee sounded a little off. Not sure I can pinpoint why--it's just the way she struck me. *shrugs*

Wonderful effort that I hope you are able to continue, because I, too, would like to know why Zoe gives them tingles! *g*