ext_3616 ([identity profile] spuffyduds.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] firefly_fanfic2006-04-06 11:12 pm

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Here are a few goofy things done for 2nd Annual Whedonverse Limericks.

Warnings: None
Ratings: Gen
Ownage: Joss
Feedback: Craved



River

There once was a girl, name aquatic,
Whose behavior was more than erratic;
Some guys gloved in blue
Turned synapses to goo
Now all of her brain waves are static.


Simon

A strapping young doctor, from money,
First boarded in clothes that were funny.
He finally appeared
Sans shirt. Kaylee leered
And all of the fangirls said, "Honey!"


Jayne

Jayne, a merc, works for gold, pesos, lira--
Any currency's fine. Also beer. A
Retreat to his bunk
Results when he's drunk
And the love of his life is named Vera.



Mal

Our captain shuns shipboard romance,
Thinks love is too scary a dance.
But Saffron knows how
To take hold of his plow
And steal his willpower. And pants.

[identity profile] bach2bach.livejournal.com 2006-04-07 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
Not bad. I enjoyed this.

[identity profile] lvs2read.livejournal.com 2006-04-07 04:14 am (UTC)(link)
Liked River's, Simon's was cute, and Mal's made me laugh! Jayne's isn't bad, but that second line just throws it off for me, sorry. All in all, a shiny effort!

[identity profile] youngest-one.livejournal.com 2006-04-07 05:00 am (UTC)(link)
Good stuff. The last one was the best, I think.

[identity profile] slartibartfast.livejournal.com 2006-04-07 05:37 am (UTC)(link)
Haha. Awesome. These are great.

[identity profile] jezdenly.livejournal.com 2006-04-08 01:43 am (UTC)(link)
Awesome! I love this, it's witty and very creative.

[identity profile] ashlesha17.livejournal.com 2006-04-10 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
spuffyduds,

These were hilarious! I particularly loved Mal's the reference to his 'plow' was classic, made remember the whole episode.

The limerick idea is good. I'm japanese and somehow I can't help think haiku, funny not so much, but maybe I'll give a try. I feel inspired.

Very Funny,

ashlesha