Very nice - I quite like this. I really think you have both their characters down well, which doesn't always happen in ff fic...
I very much like the comfort level they have together, it's natural and heartfelt without being effusive. And the three scenes show an interesting progression in their relationship.
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Date: 2006-12-05 01:33 pm (UTC)I very much like the comfort level they have together, it's natural and heartfelt without being effusive. And the three scenes show an interesting progression in their relationship.