Drabble: In Transit

[arwen-lune.livejournal.com]

Author: arwen_lune
Disclaimer: Joss is Boss
Setting: after the film. Spoilage.
Characters: Zoe. And Jayne.


In Transit


"WHAT are you doing?"

"Jus' walkin'. That a problem?"

"Is when you're doggin' my steps."

"I ain't. Just thought I'd go back to the ship."



"Go away. Do I have to be guarded like some insensible grievin' widow?"

"That guilt stuff only works on Mal."


"Was he..."

"Monty'll get him home."



"Suppose I shouldn't have yelled at him."

"Suppose."

"'Suppose'? You care when I yell at the captain now?"




"Why ARE you walkin' me home? Think I can't take care of myself?"

"Hell Zo, I know ya can. Don't like walkin' on my own. Figgered you'd protect me."

Comments

[mar-sin-nua.livejournal.com]

I love it XD I laughed out loud at the last line! Very nice work :D

[gwenfrewi72.livejournal.com]

That was funny. Just how a conversation would go down between the two of them.

[hereswith.livejournal.com]

LOL! Oh, great fun! Especially the last line ;-)

I'm a bit behind, I saw you had posted another fic, but haven't had time to read it yet, I'll do that as soon as I can.

[last-archangel.livejournal.com]

*giggle* Yeah, Zoe could protect us all. I miss Wash, but I'm glad Joss didn't kill her off as well.

[xx-squish-xx.livejournal.com]

Love it! Just a nice simple conversation where Jayne might be shown to care, but must cover it up under in that way that only he does so well. Hope you write more!

[mercenarysong.livejournal.com]

I'm at work feeling blue and this was just what I needed!! Laughed out loud at the last line. mood now: giggly. Thanks for sharing.

Great Jayne/Zoe moment...yeah!!!

[wildannuette.livejournal.com]

That's really nice *grins* last line gave me a giggle-leave it to Jayne to cover that he cares. *hugs*

[thegiantkiller.livejournal.com]

Aw, this is sweet. I love the details about Mal, he's present without being present.

[ceslas.livejournal.com]

"Go away. Do I have to be guarded like some insensible grievin' widow?"

"That guilt stuff only works on Mal."

*Giggle snort* Super dialogue all the way... And great catch by Jayne! tehe!

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

Great drabble! I love Jayne's snarky comment at the end. In fact the whole interchange is just right for these two characters.

[razycrandomgirl.livejournal.com]

Funny! I like that last bit. There's a lot to find in this little thing. You inspire me!