"Treasure" (Chapter 3 of 5)

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Title: Treasure
Author: stormkpr
Author’s email: stormkpr (at) usa (dot) net
Pairings: Simon/Kaylee; and Zoe/Wash
Characters: Simon, Kaylee, Wash, Zoe, River, Mal, Book, Jayne
Genre: Drama/Romance/General
Rating: PG-13
Timeline/Spoilers: Takes place after the TV series; the movie will not be happening
Summary: The crew finds itself facing even harder times due to a ‘verse-wide economic collapse.
Disclaimer: Love them but don’t own them. Joss is boss.

Cross-posted

The next chapter will be posted soon. The story will contain five chapters and end at about 22,000 words.

Treasure, Chapter Three

You can also read previous chapters here:
Treasure, Chapter One
Treasure, Chapter Two
Or, you can just read the whole thing off of fanfiction.net by clicking here.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Aww, this was great. Love the Wash/Zoe interaction a lot.

Would like to have seen where Simon was during those hours he wasn't with Zoe. Was Kaylee relaxing him? Was he entertaining River.

Loved that River gave away Simon's secret. heh.

S/K hopping right into bed seemed real quick too, would have liked a bit more lead up and description but, it was nice to see them just laying there and talking after the deed was done.

Looking forward to the next part!

[stormkpr.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading it and posting your detailed review.

Good point about the S/K bit being too quick and not giving enough info on what Simon was doing when kicked out of the infirmary.

I plan to have the next chapter up next Sunday or Monday (most likely Monday due to a trip I'll be on).