Aww, this was great. Love the Wash/Zoe interaction a lot.

Would like to have seen where Simon was during those hours he wasn't with Zoe. Was Kaylee relaxing him? Was he entertaining River.

Loved that River gave away Simon's secret. heh.

S/K hopping right into bed seemed real quick too, would have liked a bit more lead up and description but, it was nice to see them just laying there and talking after the deed was done.

Looking forward to the next part!