x-posted to my journal

[irradiatedsoup.livejournal.com]

When I Wake Up

Zoe, gen, implied pairings. Post-post Serenity (could be considered AU, I think).
pg-13, 3527 words, unbetaed.

Comments

[ninamonkey.livejournal.com]

Just...*wow.* I know everyone's commented in your journal, but I figured I'd comment here and create a new list of good vibes.

Excellent, *excellent* portrayal of Zoe. I loved it to bits, and I'd have to say this is the best portrayal of her I've ever read. It's totally believable, too - absolutely dark, heartbreaking, with a slight ray of hope stuck in the middle. I loved how you moved back and forth within the story as well, between the past and present.

Please, please - write more. Sequel, if possible, but the story really doesn't need one. It's a complete piece in itself and resolves what Zoe's going through in her heart...which is really what the story's about.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

--"n."

[irradiatedsoup.livejournal.com]

Oh Nina, yours was the first feedback I read this morning and it literally made my day. How lame is that? Is it very lame? I have been known to have a little lame. (*cough*) I just, was very glad that it was enjoyed. The main thing I worried about this fic was that people would find it dull, unfeeling or OOC and you addressed all these things for me right away, and it was lovely (if not entirely deserved). That's feedback to kill for. (not that I advocate killing for good feedback. Or do it. Myself) ;P

I'm going to stop rambling at you, what I meant to say was; Thankyou!