I read both versions of this, and am not sure which one I liked better. *g* The shorter one was more tightly paced, if you know what I mean?, but I liked the description of Rosemary Dawn in this one. She sounds like a cutie. *wink* I loved Mal, all unsure of how to hold a baby. *g* And the happy tears. Aww! *sniff*
So, in your longer fic, are you going to explain how Mal and Zoe became a couple? I'll keep my eyes open.
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Date: 2006-02-06 04:34 pm (UTC)So, in your longer fic, are you going to explain how Mal and Zoe became a couple? I'll keep my eyes open.