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bookaddict43 ([identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] firefly_fanfic 2006-06-13 10:24 am (UTC)

Good job here. I like the scene in the shuttle, Book praying is right on target and Inara staring out the window...Great.

Kaylee's worry and reaction to the blood is spot on as is Jayne's suspicion and wariness. I would love to see more of your work!

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