ext_12206 ([identity profile] lvs2read.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] firefly_fanfic 2006-05-15 02:40 pm (UTC)

I know absolutely nothing about Spike and Xander--never watched Buffy or Angel, but I really enjoyed this story and hope your muse returns so that you can write more of it.

My only concrit is that Kaylee sounded a little off. Not sure I can pinpoint why--it's just the way she struck me. *shrugs*

Wonderful effort that I hope you are able to continue, because I, too, would like to know why Zoe gives them tingles! *g*

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