Very beautiful, actually. I'm afraid I don't have much to probe and prod - but I do have a question. Why "Prometheus" for a planet name? I'm a writer who puts multiple meanings in the names I choose (depending on the case, of course) - and a lot of the names in the 'verse have meanings, too.

So...why did you pick that one? I believe it's a great name, but I'd like to know your thinking. :)

It's very well written, though. The flow of it is good.