friendlytampon,

Thanks for your comments. I wasn't sure about the repetitive nature of the structure so I'm glad you liked it.

I'm a Jayne lover, he may love to kill things, but the boy loves his mama.

I've been doing alot of ff drabbles to get ready for a longer story (series) I promised a good friend, but even though I've watched the series to death, this fandoms dialog daunts me. But friendly words *smiling* definitely help.

thanks

lesha