LOL I know I'm greedy for specifics, but as an avid reader of fanfic I know how I feel when I write reviews. I often wonder how much and what kind of feedback the author "really" wants. Do they want an objective assessment of my likes or dislikes or do they just want to know that it was an enjoyable way to pass the time?

I figure if I want honest feedback and have specific concerns about what the reader is thinking, then I should reply in kind to the comments.

Have you ever read "Flowers for Algernon," if so it is a big hint about the plot and why Jayne is the key character. All will be revealed in due time, as you mentioned.

A million thanks for giving me more!