Thanks for mentioning that. I am my own beta but that means that I often modify the sentence structure as I am checking for grammar spelling errors. I also try to gage the flow of the story but this means that I may change one line and then forget to chance the tense or modify the nouns etc. I hope I caught the ones you saw! I appreciate you reading and if you have any other thoughts, please don't hesitate to be brutal. Story structure and flow are as important to me as storytelling. I have no idea whether it sucks or not :).