ext_17819 ([identity profile] fan-elune.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] firefly_fanfic 2006-01-18 07:13 pm (UTC)

I have to admit, I clicked on that link out of sheer curiosity and semi-morbid fascination, quite expecting not to believe any of it. But your characterisation is spot-on and, even though Mal/Wash really isn't my cup of tea, well. If you accept that our two boys are sly? That's just spot-on. And you've got everybody's voices down perfectly, too. Only little thing, there are quite a few typos and such that could easily be worked out. But other than that? I love being pleasantly surprised by pairings I wouldn't have thought much of. Thank you for sharing.

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