Very nice! The way you tell Zoe & Wash's beginning is so simple, but so beautiful! Showing the different paths Zoe has taken, and the new one she's going to follow--wonderful.

Stylistically, I like how you repeat the phrases "a man who" and "it's because of." I tend to do the same thing in my writing. It sets such a nice, smooth rhythm, doesn't it?

Couple of nitpics, though. At the beginning you have "the bliss you’ve got know," that should be 'now'. And at the end you missed an "h" on 'here'. Darn those typos, anyway! *g*