ext_261756 ([identity profile] how-obscure.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] firefly_fanfic 2011-04-28 04:42 pm (UTC)

You know, I never really thought much about Mal's sexual history, but he doesn't seem like one to just fool around. This is a nice insight into his character. It's so like him to flash a smile and act like he's not hurt.

I really like the opening sentence and the lines But Malcolm's a skinny, fumbling teenager in the worst kind of way and He flushes hot, and swallows twice.

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