ext_354384 ([identity profile] zoesbackup.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] firefly_fanfic 2006-02-19 07:00 pm (UTC)

Thanks. What is interesting about it? Does it capture the imagination from the beginning or do you feel as though you are plowing through words waiting for something to click. Does anything in particular stand out? Do any of the sentences seem awkward or incomprehensible? Does the dialogue seem stilted or can you picture these guys and the scenario.

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